Plagiarism!
Ok, so I'm re-reading the gift in anticipation of The singing and I get up to Rachida where after meeting the Lady Ardina Cadvan sings the following...
"Her waking soul an orison
Of newborn joy, she fleetly ran
through twilit vales on lirion
Her voice in wonder echoing
And from the branches blossom sprang
In iron groves of leafmeal wan
And spring herself woke up and sang the gentle summer beckoning"
There are a few more verses but I can't be bothered typing it out. Loveley isn't it? Well it bugged me because all of a sudden I realised that it is completely plagerised. I give you an excerpt from the Lay of Beren and Luthien
"He heard there oft the flying sound
Of feet as light as linden-leaves,
Or music welling underground,
In hidden hollows quavering.
Now withered lay the hemlock-sheaves,
And one by one with sighing sound
Whispering fell the beachen leaves
In wintry woodland wavering."
You see the similarities? It's just the format and the topic the same? NO! While the format is taken from LOTR, the words are pretty much identical to The Lay of Beren and Luthien in tHoM seriously, its like she cut the damn thing up and rearranged the sentences. And then I realise. Arkan and Ardina are Beren and Luthien. I know that all high fantasy is based somewhat in Ttolkien and hers more than most, but this is way too close for comfort, its like Paloini level copying!
Evidence:
Luthien is born of a goddess and named after a star - Ardina is born from the moon
Ardina and Luthien both are immortals who fall in love with a mortal
They are both said to have left the word, but there are rumours they still walk the earth
They are both part of hidden woodland realms, protected by a Queen who has put a barrier around it
They are both considered to be the most beautiful women who ever lived
Both stories have Rings (Beren’s ring and Mearad’s ring) and pipes (Darion and Mearad)
In both cases the pipes are used for songs of loss
They both destroy the evil of the time or at least help to do so
They both change the season from winter to spring
When threatened they both turn into wolves
Ok, so some of them MAY be coincidental, but come on! There were a couple of others that have slipped my mind, I’ll add them later if I remember, but really.
Ok, enough obsessing. See you later.
Comments
LOL! I don't think it's obsessing, it's just pointing out something outrageous! And also - Alison Croggon is supposed to be a professional poet! Professional indeed XD
She might be only subconsciously influenced. Her books are good, so I'm willing to give her the benefit of the doubt :P